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[whachamacallit]

Wow...Teancum never did post his poem...hummmm...

[Captain_Teancum]

Yeah, I think in part because a lot of my stuff got lost in moves. OK, mind you, my best poetic efforts involve writing new limericks (and no, those won't be posted here), but here is something I wrote for a little diddy I plopped down on my bass guitar a couple of years ago:

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I, I lost my way
To my dismay
I can’t find home

Home, wanna go home
I’m all alone
Where can I hide?

Hide, I just can’t hide
Locked up inside
My foggy head

Head, my aching head
Rather be dead
But on I roam

Roam, still must roam
On legs of foam
I hope it’s soon

Soon, has to be soon
Light of the moon
Returns me there

There, I will be there
Without a care
My journey’s end

End, my life will end
My soul will rend
No more am I

You should have left well enough alone.

[whachamacallit]

Wow, I liked the pattern of it...it was interesting...and fun to read! LOL I was kind of disappointed when it ended. My mind was getting into it and trying to guess what the next section was going to be about. Heh

[Captain_Teancum]

Haha, thanks.